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Breakdown
has you expected i broke down from the inside out
i fell to my knees in surrender
and let everything that i held back consume me
you would have been surprised to see the demon i had become
you would have screamed in fear of the
burning hate
the rage
the hurt
and the intensity of it all
you see this is what happens when you prod to hard at something unwilling
it explodes
just like me
i thought that i was fine
that i could resist what you were doing
but i was wrong
oh yes i was very wrong
you tore down my brick wall piece by piece
placing each stone carefully on the ground
so that i wouldn't be aware that you were having this affect on me
guess i thought that i was strong
that i could handle you and everything else
and well i guess now i was wrong
i cried internally and burned externally
sleep came to slow and soon the thoughts all came back
see what you have done
i can play the blame game
and point the finger at you
but i know that it wasn't your fault
it was all mine
and now i suffer
for i have lived in denial
and let myself become angry with the world.
become angry with the innocent
i have become a demon
a burning battle that everyone doesnt know
ofcourse they don't know
why would they
i smile everyday and keep them fooled
but you saw through that realness i was faking
and cut me open to bleed the evil i have wreaked
you gathered my blood into a jar and put it aside
leaving this empty skin on the floor to rot
you know where i am going
my soul haunts the room where we had
everything and then lost it all at the course of moment
the moment of a breakdown
with one smile i thought i was stable and then you came
and then one tear i was gone
- by steelbloom |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 04/06/2009 |
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- Title: breakdown
- Artist: steelbloom
- Description: this is a poem that i wrote at the moment that i felt this way. i'm not gonna reveal the real personal background behind, i jus really hope that you understand and feel this poem. i don't care about ratings i jus want feeling.
- Date: 04/06/2009
- Tags: broke down inside depression surrender
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- albinosquirrels - 04/06/2009
- woo! first rating! i like this poem alot. it's inconsistancy really pulled me in. you expressed your feelings very well.
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