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I am the the rage the fury that takes on worlds.
I can see the fire that rages through you.
I can see the beautiful violet rose inside ,and will change my hope for iternity and will be the bull that i can drink from.
- by fgtry657567567 |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 04/06/2009 |
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- Title: the purple rose
- Artist: fgtry657567567
- Description: a true love story and sad when two full in love
- Date: 04/06/2009
- Tags: purple rose
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Comments (3 Comments)
- ddzgurl - 02/10/2010
- This is kinda boring. Like it seems like you started in the middle of it. Make it longer, it has good detail but it seems like an unfinish thought.
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- Jarmis - 04/11/2009
- Yeah, it really looks like one big unfinished thought. It's like the whole theme of the poem changes two or three different times. Which, considering it's only four lines, is bad.
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- critic-the-homeless - 04/06/2009
- ummm.... eternity is spelled wrong and that peomis kinda boring... 1/5
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