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by
k3igu
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Poetry And Lyrics
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| Submitted on 03/29/2009 |
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“Eclipse, I hate you so…
A phenomenal sight to which people can’t say no
Enough to tempt, make spirits grow
Why does it taunt me so…?”
I saw her sitting down, the one over there
Eyes which sparkled, silky like hair
I looked on in awe, a picture so great
A view that no person could hate
My mind began to drift, began to wonder
All other concerns were tossed asunder
She looked up at me, walked my way slowly
Like a gift from the heavens, quite possibly holy
Like a gift from the heavens she appeared in front of me
Words could not express how happy I could be
As I reached out to hold her in my arms I thought
A wonderful future with here I would have sought…
“Hey...Dude, wake up, are you feeling alright?
Try to stay awake, save the sleep for tonight.”
I suddenly woke up, from my daydream by a friend
Never to see that person again.
She was gone at that time, from the room and my head
Reminds me of earlier and what I had said
“Eclipse, I hate you so…
A phenomenal sight to which people can’t say no
Enough to tempt, make spirits grow
Why does it taunt me so…?”
…I finally saw my eclipse…and sadly watched it go…
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Title:
My Eclipse
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Artist:
k3igu
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Description:
...ummm, i was a bit bored and depressed about this girl and i got the idea to write this while thinking about her. Not my best work but please comment on it anyway, good or bad.
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Date:
03/29/2009
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Tags:
eclipse
love
girl
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