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Falling into your arms
I think of those times
We had together
Yours and mine
Hand in hand walking along the beach
Toes sandy, hair knotted from wind
Sitting watching the fires of the sky
Lying on your chest, on my head rests your chin
Sitting in the park under a young silk tree
Away from the world, talking constantly
Taking in the beauty of the nature around us
A diaphanous pink flower floats down to my knee
Embraced, arms entwined
Lips brushing each other’s cheeks
A gentle kiss, warm and comforting
Wishing I could feel this happy for weeks
What happened to you was sudden
You couldn’t control your pain
Which is why you made me stand with you
In the ever pouring rain
Whispering silently into my ear
“I love you, but I cannot control
This urge inside of me.
I can only help myself if you go”
So when I fell into his arms
Thinking of those times
The last thing I saw of the world
Was the change he’d gone through in his eyes
Of course he’d felt sadness and regret
When he killed me that night
He hated what he had become so much
He killed himself without a fight
Lying on cool concrete
In each other’s arms
Were the two dead bodies becoming soaked by rain
A vampire, and the mortal whom he’d charmed

- Title: Tragic love story
- Artist: __TQWEE__
- Description: ...
- Date: 03/23/2009
- Tags: tragic love story
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Comments (4 Comments)
- libraryprincess - 04/18/2009
- i love it. its blissful and happy tinged with sadness for an end its bueautiful.
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- iRetaliate - 04/17/2009
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It's ok, but just a little tip.
If you want a rhyme scheme, don't break it even once, unless it's intentional. Like... control and go don't rhyme, arms and charmed don't rhyme, times and eyes don't rhyme.
I'm sorry, but I have to give it a 4 for that. - Report As Spam
- marshii_akira - 03/23/2009
- it goods! cause my brain is in manga zone right now, it might be a little slack!!!! but i like it!
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