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i live to die i breathe to live why do i not live to breathe or die to live why am i here
why am i here so i can rot in a few years so i can watch my friends die why the hell do i deserve this?
- by OffDutyBatman |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 03/19/2009 |
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- Title: Why do i breathe?
- Artist: OffDutyBatman
- Description: the truth of a depressed person
- Date: 03/19/2009
- Tags: breathe
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- The_Homicidal_Mad_Hatter - 03/20/2009
- WARNING! Constructive criticism: You have the right idea of how to write a poem, but why not do it more creatively?
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- FaLlInG oUt Of ToDaY - 03/19/2009
- i love it. this is so much like how i fell all the time
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- The Judged Book - 03/19/2009
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I hope everything is ok.
This poem reminds me of a friend of mine whose going through a bunch of B.S. Well..can't exactly call him a friend now.. but still.
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