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im in a room full of people
I open my mouth
i talk but know one can hear me
i open my mouth again
i scream but know one can hear me
all of a sudden
pain, pain everywere
it hurts me inside
as i fall to the ground unable to get up
i scream again and again this time in pain
but know one hears me
i cry and cry as the pain gets worse and worse
i fall to the floor in pain
know one can see me
i cant move
unable to see or hear
the fear inside of me builds
i lie there
there are so many people
yet i am so alone
why i ask my self
i lie there alone in the room
alone in the world
why am i alone when there are so many people
i take my last breath
i cant breath any more
it hurts so much the pain is like burning my flesh
i take my last painful breath
unable to move a muscle as my body draws to a stop
i lie there breathless thinking my last thoughts
i fade into the distance
away from myself
away from the room
away from the world
alone
- by lil miss lou-lou |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 03/05/2009 |
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- Title: alone
- Artist: lil miss lou-lou
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Description:
i was bored in detention so i wrote a poem but consudering its me, this poem is pretty deep, believe it or not but im a complete b***h, love mwa. not really but i can be a bit mean at times not saying why (the packet of skittles made me do it, i sware)but i hope you enjoy it because i care about you all.
p.s-i love comments good or bad so i can improve be honest.
love me xxx - Date: 03/05/2009
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Comments (1 Comments)
- Yamina Himora - 03/05/2009
- I sympathize. I feel almost the same way, but cancer has claimed two of my family... 5/5*
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