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Oh,
I wish I could have been there
To say that I love you
But still I was too late and so
I could not get it through
And,
Now my heart is sitting here
In this deep dark abyss
Waiting till we meet again and
That long awaited kiss
So,
Even though we're far apart
My heart will still be true
With all my love in heart and soul
I'll still wait here for you
- Title: i'm Still Waiting for You
- Artist: Aikyoot
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Description:
i thought of this one night and so i decided to write it out the next morning(day)
even though i had to revise it constantly, it ended up pretty good.
i also submitted this to my schools Review page along with a drawing of mine.
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i wrote this poem because i now live far away from my bf.
the stanzas are arranged in a 1-7-6-8-6 syllable rotation
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i hope you all like it.
-Rae- - Date: 02/21/2009
- Tags: still waiting
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Comments (1 Comments)
- Sunafire - 02/22/2009
- Nice use of rhythm and structure there, and a cute topic. So have a 4 from me smile
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