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A single stream runs through the land,
Not pausing to stare at the endless fight.
Between the world of bone-chilling shadow
And that of eye-searing light.
Their arguments will never cease
For neither is wrong, and neither is right.
But sometimes the water dries out, disappears
And the lands of fire and ice unite.
- Title: Twilight
- Artist: jgirl39
- Description: Something I wrote for school. No, it's not about the book series, so don't even think about mentioning it.
- Date: 02/14/2009
- Tags: twilight rhyme apocalypse fight
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Comments (4 Comments)
- Gravetye - 02/18/2009
- Definitely like this, especially the second stanza. Good work.
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- Pyrrhic Victini - 02/18/2009
- You do a good job with the short & sweet bit of it. You want to hear more, but the meaning of the piece would be lost if there was anymore. I'm just unsure if I would chose fire & ice to use because they're very common.
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- The Fallen 19 - 02/17/2009
- It's kind of erie, but I really like it.
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- darkangel9194 - 02/17/2009
- It's really good. I don't see any grammatical errors and the layout is great.
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