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I wRoTe YoUr NaMe In SaNd
BuT iT gOt WaShEd AwAy
I wRoTe YoUr NaMe In ThE aIR
bUt It GoT bLoWn AwAy
I wRoTe YoUr NaMe On My HaNd
BuT iT gOt WiPeD aWaY
i WrOtE yOuR nAmE oN mY hEaRt heart
AnD iT wIlL sTaY tHeRe
FoReVeR aNd EvER!
- by chandrika saha |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 02/07/2009 |
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- Title: YoU wIlL sTaY wItH mE fOrEvEr
- Artist: chandrika saha
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- Date: 02/07/2009
- Tags: will stay with forever
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- chandrika saha - 05/02/2009
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tnx!actually i have a new account..the username is:chandrika_saha99
im doing painting and drawing,and photography - Report As Spam
- ll CrAcK3rZ ll - 04/10/2009
- hmm.. stop teh capitallsing and its kinda gud uhh.. 3/5
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- mira_mohammad - 03/10/2009
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hey...
cool poem... - Report As Spam
- carosene - 02/07/2009
- Kind of interesting, I like your imagery and repetition. Your cApItAlIsInG kind of goes with the idea of things blowing away, etc., but it really just makes it hard to read and it kind of makes you seem unintelligent. I don't mean to offend you, but that's really the effect it has.
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- iDonso - 02/07/2009
- wow
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