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Many can weep
But their cries remain unheard
Yet they shout out their tales
And they all remain untold
They can cry all they want
He's still very far
They can call all they want but
He's still lost in the war
Many have been outraged
They hollar and riot
But the government is selfish
And they want to try it
So the thousands can die
Or lose their best friend
No money maker really cares
When it gets to the end
How one can be so cruel
I don't really know
All I know is they must not be trusted
And it's time for them to go
The families can go
To the battle grounds once more
But they don't have the special person
That they had known once before
So you can cry all you want
You can show them your greif
But it's just another dollar
In the pocket of a thief
- by RisexWithxthexDead |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 02/03/2009 |
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- Title: Lost in the War
- Artist: RisexWithxthexDead
- Description: Please comment :] and rate I really would like opinions.
- Date: 02/03/2009
- Tags: lostwar
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Comments (2 Comments)
- Senkita - 02/28/2009
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WoW... this is very interesting
It just needs a tiny bit of polishing, mostly with spelling and punctuation... But otherwise, this is definitely one of the best poems I've read on gaia so far
Well done *thumbs up* - Report As Spam
- Ecstasy_bby - 02/16/2009
- I love it,you have a great way with words[:
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