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I asked GOD to give me a home; he didnt gave me that.
I asked GOD to give me a family; he didnt gave me that.
I asked GOD to give me a true love; he did gave me that.
I asked GOD to give me an angel; he gave me "YOU"
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- by X_I LOVE CHARLOTTE_X |
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- | Submitted on 02/02/2009 |
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- Title: My 1 tru love!!
- Artist: X_I LOVE CHARLOTTE_X
- Description: This poem is 2 my gf that i love so much Charlotte ^^
- Date: 02/02/2009
- Tags: love
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- Scarletgreen - 02/03/2009
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'gave'?
In my opinion, it is sweet, overdone, and if you want it to be powerful;
proper English would be nice, thank you. - Report As Spam
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