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I knew in my heart that someday it would end,
though I wished desparately for that to not be true,
for I did not think my heart would ever be able to mend
should I ever have to part with you.
But I did.
I didn't see it coming,
til she opened up my eyes,
showed me who you were,
and exposed all of your lies.
Though my heart was broken,
I probably would have stayed,
For even if I were to part from you,
I doubted the feelings I had would fade.
I loved you so much,
I wished you felt the same,
But perhaps I loved you too much,
so maybe I am to blame?
I think I still miss you,
for you made me feel so great,
but now I sit and wonder
if I really miss you, Kate.
So is it you I miss
and the way you loved,
or is it how being in love
made me experience pure bliss?
Seeing you with him,
doesn't really phase me,
but I can't help wishing,
that I, too, had someone to call my baby.
So I guess it's not you I missed,
hell, I never even talk to you,
and if you died I'd know what to do:
Nothing. Hahaha. b***h.
- Title: "Is it you I miss?"
- Artist: Kalawyn
- Description: Yeah, I wrote this a few weeks ago over my break-up...Just some feelings I'd had for a while and decided to write down. Hope you all like it--it has a nice ending. <3
- Date: 01/30/2009
- Tags: miss
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Comments (2 Comments)
- Hot lin78 - 09/01/2009
- Pretty good, but your rhythm isn't quite right in parts of it.
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- sweet_awesome_giri - 01/30/2009
- omg...I luv it 5/5 i sumtime feel dat way 2...bt ...i think im ova it...and its gud i think....bt stil 5/5
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