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White rain comes down soft.
It rests on the gras so green,
like clouds in summer.
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- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 01/19/2009 |
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- Title: Snow
- Artist: mexicantacos2003
- Description: Haiku (I think).
- Date: 01/19/2009
- Tags: snow clouds haiku
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- x - - no utopia - 01/24/2009
- A haiku is a Japanese poem with 5 syllables on the first verse, 7 on the second, and 5 again on the last verse. There has to be 3 verses altogether. This is a haiku, but it needs some work.
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- Bleuraven123 - 01/22/2009
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I have forgotten what a haiku is so I don't really know what to say...
But I think to be a haiku, it needs one more line.. sweatdrop - Report As Spam
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