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The blood went cold within my veins
as you left the door
It took some time to finally see
My warmth you weren't no more
I cried silently,
Was there no end to the pain I felt?
The answer came from the blade
The outlet to my pain that was dealt
My body cries crimson tears
Even years after you left
Forever my body will cry
Until my last breath
- Title: My last breath
- Artist: fatbaebie
- Description: Poem/Lyrics..you decide :)
- Date: 01/19/2009
- Tags: please dont
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Comments (4 Comments)
- Trixanity_Slive - 11/03/2011
- This poem is nice, though it doesn't exactly flow. It could use a little more work, but I still like it. smile
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- paigy-pooh - 02/05/2009
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this is actualy pretty good.
i like it wink - Report As Spam
- Holyhades - 01/19/2009
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The transition from finally see to My warmth is a bit bumpy ...
still an okay poem though =s - Report As Spam
- Moonlight_Maiden123 - 01/19/2009
- ok now this is a emo poem and i say this is a poem, a good poem actually, sad, but still nice work
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