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In some sick, sadistic way I am proud of what I’ve done-
Left her body lying there while still holding up the gun.
Masochistic laughter seeps out from inside me
And this somber scene’s made petty- the way death ought not to be.
But I can’t suppress this wicked smile for I know I have done well.
This inner conflict settled by damning innocence to Hell.
Yes, down my demons have fallen, my tempest begun her reign,
I have shot my inner demons, aiming only for more pain.
- Title: Shot my inner demons
- Artist: _Roooose_
- Description: Comment
- Date: 01/16/2009
- Tags: shot inner demons
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Comments (4 Comments)
- Cottoncandyocbra3 - 01/25/2009
- You've a penchant for the dark... Quite a bit like me. Good work.
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- RandomOrgasmicPoke - 01/19/2009
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wicked sweet......5/5
posted some poems on here plz read and comment ppl - Report As Spam
- Lord Scarthan - 01/19/2009
- True emotion, rare but captured like the ray of light that escapes a droplet only to be observed ever more meticulously by those who see rainbows and not just rainy days. Keep writing please; you are fairly good.
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- Kibroth - 01/18/2009
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Short, tight, raw and beautiful.
This is my kind of poem.
Suggestions: In line 3, remove out, or exchange for "wells" or a similar synonym; in line 8, I'd try to avoid repeating, instead starting with "shooting each one down".
I want MORE. wink Good job.
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