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your eyes are a paragon
i'm a slave to your mind
to gaze into your eyes
is to dive into oblivion.
to float atop chaotic emotions
to see into the unknown
to swim across ecstasy
to burn into the morning sun.
save my soul, ere i leave this disease
capture your desire inside of me
i hate everything
i hate your mind
i hate the way you enslave my design.
i can see into your soul
from the black abyss in your eyes
the exotic sound of your breathing
is killing me inside
i cannot bare the passion of your touch
leaving strawberry gashes across your skin as such.
this realm you've created
is a catastrophic destruction
of the mind and soul
and senses behold
©
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- by chelsyfays |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 01/02/2009 |
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- Title: Save Me
- Artist: chelsyfays
- Description: 100% by moi.
- Date: 01/02/2009
- Tags: passion desire love hate
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Comments (3 Comments)
- Atheshya - 01/05/2009
- Probobly the best line here is 'leaving strawberry gashes across your skin', because that has some description in it, and you can really use description and imagery to your advantage. I like how this isn't *quite* a normal love poem...
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- X_Midnight_Wind_X - 01/05/2009
- cry that's really good!
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- NakedJack - 01/04/2009
- wining love poetry that has flooded every corner of the internet..... my prejudges wants me to give it a bad rating.....but the writing is good *cries* I don't know what to do.................................5/5 *dies inside*
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