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Life is like a bathroom
Sometimes it washes the pain away(shower)
Othertimes its full of $#!7(toilet)
Sometimes it tells us we need to look at ourselves and analize how we are and how we look(mirror)
Or if we need to wash what we say (toothbrush)
Or if we need a better look in our face (makeup or face cream)
Sometimes its so full of problems (sh!t) that all we need to do
Is come up with a solution(plunger) to flush our worries away
Sometimes its the ideal area for relaxation (own home spa)
When you need to clear your mind of bad thoughts or parasitical images (dander and fleas)
just take a while to wash it away (shampoo) and make it easier to clear your mind (conditioner)
whenever you are hurt and in need of repair (scars and cuts)
you must prepare in life for self heal (first-aid drawer)
sometimes you need a change of look or of style in your life (bathroom decors) or in your self (makeup, again)
But you cant let it be filled with unpleasantness and life-threatening stains (dirty bathroom)
you must put your back into it to maintain you own life or no one will do it for you (make sure you have detergent ready)

- Title: Life comparisons with- Place 1
- Artist: Nicooriia
- Description: I was bored so now i thought about making a little series XD This will probably be the most random one, though when you think about it, its kinda true. I'm am thinking of making a series comparing things and people in life with objects and their properties. Some funny, others that makes no sense at first, but just give it a read, you'll see its true.
- Date: 12/31/2008
- Tags: lessons life part
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Comments (6 Comments)
- FaLlInG oUt Of ToDaY - 01/19/2009
- rondomness.... I LOVE IT!!! it is so detailed nd the comparisons work nd its all true
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- Dragons_rule_the_sky - 01/04/2009
- it takes quite a creative mind to compare life to a bathroom with such flow, clarity and detail. good job.
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- angellus zerahk - 01/03/2009
- awesomeness
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- Nicooriia - 01/03/2009
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Lol, maybe, but i thought it would be funny XD ill keep that in mind for the next poem :3 thank you for your comments ^^ vry lovely
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- PescadoNino17 - 01/02/2009
- I like it, but I think it would have been better if you wouldn't have told us what each object was. Its more fun when we have to infer instead of just being told.
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- iRetroDragon - 01/01/2009
- nice
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