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Thank you
by Jordon Tripp
Most of my life
i have been like
steel and stone
metal and rock
I have heard
the saddest of stories
I have seen
the hardest of moments
I have been called
many things
i have been called
dark, soulless, heartless
I have never
been moved
not mentally
not emotionally
then it changed
all of it changed
all with in an instant
i had a heart
I met someone
and loved her
she met me
and loved me back
we saw each
other, rarely
but every moment we did
we cherished them
the moments
were limited
for we did not know
what the world planned for us
on a day like any other
the one who gave me a heart
was taken away
by the cruel fate of all things
I have always
blamed myself
for not being there
in her final moments
now i live
for her
and for
me
if i was given
a choice of words to say
to her before she left
i would say, "Thank you."
- by Nightmare of genesis |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 12/13/2008 |
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- Title: Thank you
- Artist: Nightmare of genesis
- Description: This is a poem i wrote for someone very special to me who can't be here today...
- Date: 12/13/2008
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Comments (6 Comments)
- Kare Bearr - 01/13/2009
- Aww..that almost made me cry..
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- Corebreaker - 12/18/2008
- The poem is so deep and amaze
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- the_vampuppy - 12/16/2008
- this is amazing
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- Avy-chan - 12/15/2008
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This so deep.
One of the greatest.
I'm so sorry about what happened to your loved one..
5/5
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- Asebi - 12/15/2008
- this was one of the most beautiful poems ive ever read ; ; 5/5
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- Lady_Lycanthrope1990 - 12/13/2008
- this is very moving 5/5
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