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Drip drop
Drip drop
Rain again
Don’t stop
Dance dance
Muddled mess
All alone
I must confess
Transparent misery
Staining skin
Labeled reject
Face of sin
Stagnate failure
Idle time
Word of life
Will not rhyme
End of song
Don’t look back
Streak of lightning
Flash then CRACK!
- Title: Idle Time
- Artist: onionio
- Description: It was raining, I was writing. End of discription.
- Date: 12/12/2008
- Tags: idle time
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Comments (3 Comments)
- riko_sume - 01/30/2009
- I understand how you feel. I sometimes write in that same structure, starting out with short like two words stanzas and then longer stanzas, and by the end of it I am completely confused with the structure....^_^;
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- iiFluffeh - 12/29/2008
- i like the last phrase, "End of song dont look back streak of lightning flash then CRACK!" it is a very nice rhythmic poem u have. biggrin
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- Jackie Nemo - 12/20/2008
- I really like it's rhyme and flow. Very good job. 4/5
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