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The edge of the razor
So sharp,so clean,so smooth
The girl had lost so much
The pain was strong
She wanted it gone,
The edge was so percise
All she could hope is that
The pain would go away
She spent her life crying
Her arms full of scars
And than that one day
It was too deep
She just waited to die
No one really knew her problems
All she did was help them
But they never stoped to ask her how she was
No one knew until they found her crying
in the bathroom
Blood and scars on her arms
DEAD.
She just couldnt resist
The edge
So sharp, so clean, so smooth
The edge of the razor.
- by Falling _Angel_56 |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 12/12/2008 |
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- Title: The edge
- Artist: Falling _Angel_56
- Description: a poem i wrote.....idk how good it is sooo..tell me???
- Date: 12/12/2008
- Tags: razoredgesademodepressing
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Comments (3 Comments)
- XxHan-HanxX - 12/12/2008
- woah.....that was awesome........*looks down*.......wow misa xD
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- misa_amane_chan7 - 12/12/2008
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I am..... -w-
Its good, but its also showing us whats in your soul, and you know what that is? A DEEP DARK DARK VORTEX >.<
Your gonna get sucked into the darkness! See the light! D= - Report As Spam
- l- Hikaru-kun -l - 12/12/2008
- OooOoOoO Allison's gunna hit youuuuuuu... (with the lock.)
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