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I stand at the edge of a cliff,
surounded by the darkness you call love.
You stand behind me,
sayin you are here to help.
But i know the truth,
you want to be the one that will be pushing me off the cliff.
But there is somthing you don't know,
im am already ready to jump off myself.
- by screamyourlegoff |
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- | Submitted on 12/12/2008 |
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- Title: Into the darkness we call love
- Artist: screamyourlegoff
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Description:
I was in a mood so i just started typing, i dont think its that good i just wana post sumthing.
and if u r goin to rate plz comment on what to edit and how to improve - Date: 12/12/2008
- Tags: into darkness call love
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- B-B-B-BeanCup - 12/17/2008
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first off, pick up a grammar textbook, learn your tenses. I'm pretty sure you've been speaking English for a bitsy now, so you know there are rules/suggestions to express yourself more clearly.
"You you want to be theone that will be pushing me of the cliff"
there are so many things wrong with this line. Reread it! Seriously! Do you see all the things wrong?
My biggest suggestion to you is to PROOFREAD. - Report As Spam
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