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Crinkled and so dried up
It exudes the feeling of despair
once a vibrant hue, it sits black and lifeless.
Not preserved, it seems, in the sun's rays.
What makes us desire this?
Simply?
Hunger.
Raisins are... quite tasty.
- Title: Simple Desire
- Artist: FieldDoc
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Description:
When I post something like this, I so deeply enjoy negative commentary I have to chuckle to myself.
I hope you folks read it, and smile, and shake your heads with a funny look on your faces. - Date: 12/10/2008
- Tags: simple desire
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Comments (2 Comments)
- FieldDoc - 12/16/2008
- Thanks, very little commenting happens here it seems. I suppose if I wrote some angsty love poems or something of the like I'd get more, huh? Thanks for the rating and comment.
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- Caramell Splash - 12/10/2008
- lol dat was gud i wasnt expecting it
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