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once I came to think of why I love you and why you make me smile.
I love you becuase you are there when i need you as the most.
I love you becuase you are brave eventhou you dont think so aswell.
I love you because you make me smile as noone has before.
You make me smile not becuase your a clown
Bbut becuase i love you and i know you feel better from my smiles,
I do not smile cause you ar a clown
But becasue you comfort me and cherrish me eventhou I am sick.
- Title: my smile to you
- Artist: Kitthe
- Description: i cam to whrite a part of this to the man i love when we talked about life in general. and i cmae to think of in the smae time why i love him and this is one of my many reasons.
- Date: 12/05/2008
- Tags: smile
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Comments (4 Comments)
- NORMASOCEXI - 08/22/2009
- awwww dis poem is helluh romantic but i dont mind the spelling great awsome poem i loved it.! biggrin
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- Phantom Geass - 12/10/2008
- nice job, i ignore spelling mistakes because they don't define a piece of writing, the message of emotion does.
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- NebuChi3 - 12/07/2008
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You kept spelling because as 'becuase'.
Some things were misspelled, but it was good. - Report As Spam
- Mark Of The Wild - 12/05/2008
- I'm still a clown in my own way, just to you i'm someone different. never the less it's great.
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