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Crackle 'neath footfalls
A river crimson and gold
'Round Broken Elders of Arbor. Their stories untold.
Called by the whispers of angels
Like windswept feathers they fall.
Our silent protectors;
Atop the wings of heaven they soar.
From their velvet embrace
Warmth and wonder are born.
Such is the splendor
Of perpetual autumn.
- Title: Autumn in Aeternum
- Artist: Rinarii
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Description:
The beauty and comfort of fall. I could walk along forever.
I wrote this for an English assignment, though I've made quite a few changes since then. Mostly because I wanted to use it for something else but it demanded a slightly different meaning.
Alrighty comment away! - Date: 12/04/2008
- Tags: autumn aeternum
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Comments (3 Comments)
- Rinarii - 12/07/2008
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Thanks love!
Yea I never much got into the whole syllable counting thing. I probably should and I do on occasion...just not usually. >.< And autumn's my favorite season. Now if only we didn't have to attend school at that time. But thanks!
You too Paper Laundry! ^_^ - Report As Spam
- Ariiadne - 12/07/2008
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WELL HAY THAR GURLFREND.
Good work. wink Some of the syllable patterns threw me off a bit when reading, but that's just me. I'm so used to writing and reading structured poetry. Regardless, I like it. Autumn is indeed a lovely season~ - Report As Spam
- Augee - 12/04/2008
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First!
Love it! The detail describes everything perfectly. I had a lovely image in my head while reading it. smile - Report As Spam
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