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I'm grinning like a fool,
as you sit here and think everything is cool.
In my mind is something you can't read,
as I hover over you and watch you bleed.
I love the feeling.
You lay there bleeding.
The crimson color of your skin,
I feel the control , you're letting me win.
Thinking of my next victim, the one who hurt me so,
I need the smile when I see the fire blow.
I hear the scream,
just like my favorite dream,
I love the sounds,
You screaming as I blow out the rounds.
Black, cold blood drowning you as you swim,
I see you look to the left, staring at him.
Walking to your loved one as you watch in your last moment,
I stand above him and let him watch as I deliver the bullets I sent.
Yelling in pain,
I know I'm insane,
You just can't seem to stop,
So I laugh.
Knives in the gut,
Your mouth clamped shut,
I chuckle to myself and grin,
thanking God for my mind, my awful sin.
Everyone is gone,
I feel the satisfaction that I won,
The only one left is you.
What more destruction can I possibly do?
- Title: Insanity
- Artist: iK0nan
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Description:
This poem took me for about ten whole minutes before I've even decided to enter it here in the Arenas and I would like to thank the one who've inspired me to make this. You know who you are. Hope you like it and please leave nice comments.
P.S.
I do not own the reference picture. - Date: 12/01/2008
- Tags: insanity insane ik0nan
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Comments (3 Comments)
- Agrikar the Hidden - 12/13/2008
- Mmm... Everything up to Stanza Three, Lines One and Two (especially those lines) seemed very hard to flow and follow, but after that was perfect, I thought, (for instance, "Yelling in pain, I know I'm insane" works because both lines are short and quick) but some lines were just way too long to fit into the poem itself.
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- Berri Tsuki - 12/03/2008
- Awesome....the killing..the insanity xD
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- x Obscene Bliss x - 12/03/2008
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nice.....very....NICE..... > smile muwahahaha
I love it, hahahha insanity rulez!!!!!
XD hahha
nakz ice ganda ah XD reminds me of somebody..... >=D - Report As Spam