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life sometimes passes with a simple breeze,
as death comes our way we scatter and hide.
as we die we may cough and we may wheez
but paths to forever we cannot ride.
So if we are to fine lifes true meaning
then why do we seem to wither and die
why do our minds have such a big leaning
we cant comprehend in our own minds eye
- by Grand Shadow Wolf |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 11/30/2008 |
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- Title: WHY DO WE LIVE WHY DO WE DIE!
- Artist: Grand Shadow Wolf
- Description: what is the true meaning of life, is there even one, how can we know, only time will tell.
- Date: 11/30/2008
- Tags: live
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Comments (7 Comments)
- Unfound Dreams - 12/23/2008
- Well okay, why do we die? Becasue we are mortal. And mortality isn't really a blessing, its actually a disease.Mortality isn't something we should be proud of. We should wish that such things as The fountain of youth or immmortality were real, instead of wondering the meaning of life, Because by the time we find out, we'll be dead. Look up mortal in the dictionary, then rethink a few things about your poem.
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- xXbabyfayceXx - 12/16/2008
- i dont like to read but that waz so good yd u write one about britt and drew
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- xXxvampire_lolitaxXx - 12/14/2008
- wow keoni thats really good! thats the best one i read so far other than the one u wrote for me and drew
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- Silent_Usagi_XxX - 12/06/2008
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5/5 well written. i like the flow of the poem
ur amazing biggrin - Report As Spam
- Grand Shadow Wolf - 12/01/2008
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stop putting stupid comments and grading low for no reason
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- xXROXORZsurfnigXx - 11/30/2008
- WHY DO WE SUCKS WHY DO WE SACKS! 1/5
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- Nikki4815 - 11/30/2008
- It's true!! This poem has a lot of meaning in it, and it means something to me. *favorites* I give you a 5/5. Rate back? My entry is called "Unspoken Message"
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