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Death has fallen
The night has come
Life is over
People have failed
No one gave her a chance
They looked at her
Cast her out
They said they were there
They promised to care
But their care took her
It riped what was left
Of the soul that wished
An urned to be free
She looked up to the sky
Said a prayer one last time
Closed her eyes
Took her life
So she could be free
Without tears and sorrow
Without pain and loneliness
Her dream came true
But they kept her from it
So she chose this way out
If you knew her
If you loved her
Hold her in your heart
Close your eyes
Pray that she finds
The heaven she wished for
The heaven that was promised
And say goodbye
To this fragile girl
- by Silvia-x-Gaara |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 11/25/2008 |
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- Title: Good-Night
- Artist: Silvia-x-Gaara
- Description: Well, I wrote this a few weeks ago. I really can't say too much, the description to this poem of mine is all up to you. It's all seen threw the readers eyes.
- Date: 11/25/2008
- Tags: goodnight
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Comments (5 Comments)
- MezzoMesiah - 11/27/2008
- at least this poems over.... 1/5
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- Shadow 0f Hearts - 11/25/2008
- I know this feeling... 6.6 I like this poem. 5.
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- Black Rose 613 - 11/25/2008
- i love it! very emotional^^
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- draconfor - 11/25/2008
- 5
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- Corruptious - 11/25/2008
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OMG! this poems goes soo well with Naruto: Sadness and Sorrows..
but anyways I like it... kinda depressin.. but then again most poems are mostly depressin.. it comes from the writers Emotions at that point thats how i go.
very nice. you should think about reading your poem while listening to Sadness and Sorrows from Naruto the anime.
anyways 5/5 ^^ - Report As Spam