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Dismal Departure
Aching, ripping, numbing pain.
Just a flash.
Just a stab.
Aching, ripping, numbing pain.
In my throat.
In my heart.
Aching, ripping, numbing pain.
But a word.
But a look.
Aching, ripping, numbing pain.
Running through my viens.
Aching, ripping, numbing pain.
Stinging, wet, salty tears.
Just a drop.
Just a speck.
Stinging, wet, salty tears.
In my eyes.
In my gaze.
Stinging, wet, salty tears.
But a plea.
But a sob.
Stinging, wet, salty tears.
Red rimmed eyes guant with pain.
Stinging, wet, salty tears.
Consuming, total, evil darkness.
Just a void.
Just a hole.
Consuming, total, evil darkness.
In my life.
In my soul.
Consuming, total, evil darkness.
But a shield.
But a defense.
Consuming, total, evil darkness.
No meaning to life.
Consuming, total, evil darkness.
Flashing, gleaming, silver blade.
Just a moment.
Just a slice.
Flashing, gleaming, silver blade.
In my hand.
In my heart.
Flashing, gleaming, silver blade.
But a desertion.
But a salvation.
Flashing, gleaming, silver blade.
Red blood flowing freely.
Flashing, gleaming, silver blade.

- Title: Dismal Departure
- Artist: Akoodles
- Description: Pain of depression caused by loneliness.
- Date: 11/24/2008
- Tags: dismal departure depression alone
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Comments (2 Comments)
- white horse93 - 12/27/2008
- wooooooooowwwwwwwwww...........now THAT is emotion!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! NO poem has compared to the raw emotion in this one(not even MY poems!!!!) YOU ARE AWESOME!!!!!! more poems more poems more poems!!!!!
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- Michael Jackson Fan 4ever - 11/26/2008
- i...love it! its true 4 a lot of people!!
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