- i dont know about u ,i dont care about anyone ,im sick about getting bossed ,im sick about being tossed(i do get tossed),im sick of being a nobody i want to be a somebody ,when i see in ur eyes, i see ur a good or bad person deep down in my soul ,i never want it to go, i cant see the future but the past, i cry a tear comes down ,its coming down now, because i dont care!!!!!
- by BarbiieByitch |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 11/19/2008 |
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- Title: I dont care!
- Artist: BarbiieByitch
- Description: i know you dont care!
- Date: 11/19/2008
- Tags: dont care
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- iluvpolkadots - 11/22/2008
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Uhm...I'll tell you something any up and coming writer needs to know. DO NOT-I REPEAT DO NOT!!- EVER USE TXT TALK. If you have 'I's CAPITALIZE them. Spelling mistakes are forgivable if there arent too many, we're only..human. The letter 'u' is not a word. Run on senteces are DEADLY. They will kill your work. Dont take this the wrong way..but...fix it.
Work on your spelling, paragraph flow, and sentence structure. Repost, and get back to me. I see potential here, but you really need to work on i - Report As Spam
- bannan456 - 11/22/2008
- THAT WAS GOOD!
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