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Your heart stops beating,
A deathly silence.
As the chains hold you down.
No escape.
The cold steel,
Penetrates your flesh.
Death starting you down,
With a twisted smile.
Alone and lost.
There is no help.
You want to escape,
But you can't.
The sharp edge of it's blade,
Digs in, burning, making you scream.
The haunted face rushes in.
You scream.
That smile, scarred and bleeding,
Grins,
Drawing you in.
A deathly stare,
Mixes with the smile.
Silence.
- by FallenAngelForMe |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 11/18/2008 |
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- Title: Silence
- Artist: FallenAngelForMe
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Description:
We had to do a poem for English, this was mine. I'm not too sure what it's about. It sortof wrote itself.
Tell me what you think, and I may continue with poetry. Who knows.
But apparently it's pretty good, my english teacher seemed to like it. I was called a 'emo' after the class heard it being read outloud though. - Date: 11/18/2008
- Tags: silence smile death stare evil
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Comments (7 Comments)
- Anonymous... - 07/02/2009
- Excellent poem! 5 stars biggrin
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- draconfor - 11/25/2008
- 5
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- Moshaholic - 11/25/2008
- Dont stop writing! You're amazingly great biggrin
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- changeusernamepls - 11/25/2008
- VERY GOOD POEMMMMMMM ^_^ i like it
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- iRawrinator - 11/24/2008
- it reminds me of a fat guy raping a cow :=D
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- FallenAngelForMe - 11/24/2008
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Hehe I feel happy because of all the nice comments smile
I'm glad people like my poem. - Report As Spam
- Moonlight Summoner - 11/24/2008
- ya it is a very good poem... but I'm sorry it is a little emo-ish O.o lol
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