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There was a young girl,
Who was a sweet mermaid,
Her name was Pearl,
Little bags she made.
She was looking for seaweed,
Up on the shore,
And while she was picking,
A young man she saw.
He had gem blue eyes,
And golden hair,
A smile with it's own,
Twinkling fair.
He saw her too,
As he looked up,
But failed to see,
The tail she'd got.
They said "Hello, who are you?",
And what not,
And fell in love with eachother,
Right there on the spot.
Now darling Pearl's,
Little old father,
Was not happy,
For he would rather,
She married Tom,
OrLuke or Theodore,
Not some young bloke
She found on the shore.
But Pearl was determined,
As she could be,
So thecouple ran away,
Away to open seas.
And then they got married,
Lived happily ever after.
And I can say the same,
For Pearl's little old father.
- Title: Pearl's seashore romance
- Artist: Lyra08
- Description: It's quite funny, something that I had to do for homework. It's kind of like the little mermaid.
- Date: 11/02/2008
- Tags: pearl seashore romance mermaid
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Comments (5 Comments)
- DemeaningMeaning - 11/08/2008
- not amazing, but has potential.And do plz check out what ive written, id like that.
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- delta epsilon - 11/03/2008
- i love a good romance.but the rhyming was not the greatest. ide like it more if it was like telling a story. perhaps you should do a rewrite and enter it in the "fiction" catagory. sorry. am i being to harsh? anyway, ill give it 3/5, k!
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- phiah33 - 11/02/2008
- this is so lon that it took me a week to read!
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- Lyra08 - 11/02/2008
- thnx alot tahikun, id like to see what youve written
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- tahikun - 11/02/2008
- So booriiiing.
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