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Bring to me the warmth of a frozen sun,
let rain clouds smother the skies of my world,
where I walk amongst the ashes,
as dead leaves fall from the trees of my heart.
Tears fall like unholy angels,
singing a song of desperation as
they fall from the eyes of their maker.
Stilled in darkness my life passes by,
as the time clock of shadows ticks away at my life.
Inside I can hear my desperate soul crying,
this is the end of me,
this is the dying. . .
- by Missing reflection |
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- | Submitted on 10/29/2008 |
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- Title: The Dying
- Artist: Missing reflection
- Description: A poem that displays the colors of my soul and describes the inner turmoil it suffers.
- Date: 10/29/2008
- Tags: dying
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Comments (5 Comments)
- Aahshley - 10/30/2008
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Found a typo!:
Stilled in darkness my life my passes by,
there's an extra 'my' in there.
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- RedWhiteBlack - 10/29/2008
- It's a good poem, though, I see many of these on Gaia.
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- allisun1 - 10/29/2008
- WOW! breathtaking!
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- Lex2442 - 10/29/2008
- it is complicated... i didn't get it at first but.... its still complicated... i like it... after i read it again it made more sense good job.
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- _S3XY-B3AUTY_ - 10/29/2008
- good
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