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Most of us can't find our way
we live out lives from day to day
you learn the reason, learn the rhyme
commit the treason, do the time
Does anybody care
we're on a direct flight to nowhere
we take to the skies
with our blindfolded eyes
- by Nira_Rae38 |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 10/19/2008 |
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- Title: Direct flight to Nowhere
- Artist: Nira_Rae38
- Description: This is my third song, It's still in the prosses. My other two are on my prohile(journal)! Please comment even if you think is sucks. Just the first verse and chorus.
- Date: 10/19/2008
- Tags: direct flight nowhere song
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Comments (2 Comments)
- astrum202 - 10/19/2008
- Finish it. Nice rhythm, though you should extend on the music imagery in the first stanza.
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- Atama Muhonnin - 10/19/2008
- I love it...It is amazing and you should keep up the good work!
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