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heart there was a bird with beautie of blue heart
heart up apone the window still heart
heart we lured it in with a piece of bread heart
twisted AND SMASHED IT'S ******** HEAD!!! twisted
Comments (4 Comments)
- jasper joker - 10/19/2008
- omigod, you guys are being way too harsh. not everything has to be as serious as you, okay? also, its not very poetic of you to say that he will grow up to be a killer and go to jail, just because of killing a bird, and not even, writing a poem? if eeverytine in your family is a cop, are you really gonna come to arrest him for writing this? if anythin you should apologise and erase your message. biatch. 5/5!!!
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- Tr0pical Gurl - 10/19/2008
- u r not a ******** poet but that was kinda funny. 4!
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- MotherNature15 - 10/19/2008
- I agree. Poems are meant to express ones emotions and experiences. Not to write sicko topics about smashing birds head. It's people like you who will grow up to be killers and sent to jail! I know, I've seen it, everyone in my family is a cop. If ya know what's good for you, you'll find a way to erase this poem or else!
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- onceuponatiger - 10/19/2008
- u r a horrible poe!!!t u shouldnt write stuff like that. it makes me want to smash your ****** head!!!
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