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Betrayal
There was a time when I called you “friend”
I turned at your voice and smiled at your face
Around you I was strong, I had sworn to defend
My closest person, the one I will always chase.
That sparkle in you eyes always gave me hope
And I felt like there was nothing in my way
I would fight I would kill just to get to the top
And if someone touched you, I would make him pay
But those times are gone now and you know it all too well
You still hold that cursed knife you stabbed in my back
Cause I was naive… I never thought there would be “farewell”
And now I bleed – you left something in my heart – a crack.
Now my life has changed, though I remember you still
But the one thing that’s left in my heart for you is hate
Because of you, I find it all too hard to trust… to even feel…
And I’ve realized by now, that I would always stay in such a way.
- by Akai Ketsu |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 10/17/2008 |
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- Title: Betrayal
- Artist: Akai Ketsu
- Description: There was a time when I called you "friend"...
- Date: 10/17/2008
- Tags: betrayal friend friendship
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Comments (4 Comments)
- Kaleidoscope Rigby - 10/17/2008
- Very very well done. Showed a lot of emotion and depthness, I appreciated that.
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- IceDollSayaka - 10/17/2008
- That was nicely written! Keep up the great job! smile
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- Sm3xii_muffin_Cooki3_ - 10/17/2008
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you are a really poetic person!
it really inspires me to not let go of a friend!
XD!!!
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- sublime_necromancer - 10/17/2008
- Great piece! Personally, I've been in that situation...I would have included more adjectives to make it stronger, but it's your piece. Just gonna leave you with...everything in the piece works. You should think of publishing.
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