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I stand beneath a quiet crone
A nearly lifeless tree
Abandoned forgotten and sad
It bears no leaves
The perfect place to open my chest
And drop my heart
It hits the cold barren ground
I shudder as it falls apart
I tell the tree it has a companion
That will always be faithful and stay
That was the reason I let it go
It had become a burden to carry around everyday
I turn without a second glance
From the disabled tree
And whisper good bye
To the heart that will never again beat
- by tksunshine93 |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 10/13/2008 |
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- Title: Abandoned
- Artist: tksunshine93
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- Date: 10/13/2008
- Tags: abandoned
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Comments (5 Comments)
- xXxAmericanCheeseOmletxXx - 04/13/2009
- wow i did one called ABANDONED too. good job.
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- BannedAccount00300028096 - 11/03/2008
- A broken heart is hard to carry and it can be a burden but never give up hope on yourself cause you didn't give up on me!
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- BumbleBeeSex_ - 10/16/2008
- *high five* at first I am like...AHHH shes a nOOb and then I read your writing and realize what a bass TURD i was and found out that your charcter never judges what is revealed from the keyboard and mind.
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- mexicantacos2003 - 10/16/2008
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i like it.
very illustrative.
we followed you the whole poem
so that in the end you would break our hearts
very good
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- Kenmu - 10/16/2008
- this is a nother really good peom.
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