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I sit crying
In the rain
To hide my tears
And shed my pain
Holding on to
What you said
As thoughts of you
Race through my head
I watch the tears
Fall in my hands
As I lay footprints
In the sand
The rain it crashes
Around my head
Yet so many things
Are left unsaid
I lay my head
Down for sleep
As unwanted voices
Begin to weep
A moment I realize
The weeping is me
Still crying tears
Unsettled, unfree
I give up hope
To cry in the rain
To hide my tears
And shed my pain

- Title: Cry in the Rain
- Artist: Jayleena
- Description: Its kind of weird how this poem came about... There I was sitting in my room trying desperately to fall asleep, and while I spaced out those words just popped in my head so I went with it. I wrote it downm, worked on it a bit...and here it is!! Hope you like it. :D
- Date: 09/28/2008
- Tags: rain
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Comments (5 Comments)
- SmileZombiiie - 08/29/2009
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that was good. :]
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- Murder of the Mind - 10/20/2008
- I really like it. I know what you mean about poems coming into your head when you're nearly asleep. My most creative works come to me when I'm half awake XD
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- pinoyforever - 09/28/2008
- i like it
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- [Midnight].[Memories] - 09/28/2008
- It's so good. I wish I could write like that.
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