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The Smudge on My Daughter’s Face
a reaction to bombings in Iraq
the rain beat back the smoke
pummeled the gritty clouds down to their source
revealed, piece by piece, the crater of their birth
first a rugged wall with the jagged edge of a broken bottle
a lone curtain too stunned to flap in the wind adorns
the blown out window rimmed with diamond baby teeth
that wait for a reaching hand to finally fall
upon the ripped torso of a faded doll
whose button eyes dangle to each side
while one arm smolders with a lackluster fire
in the stretched creases of her dress
lie grits from a dip in the breakfast cereal
ground in by constant hugging
clinging in the dark night fear of waiting
for Today
the sudden blow laden with finality
empty eyes stuck open in shock
to stare upwards at the dull, sullen sky
a young girl’s grimy hand brushes the beloved doll
one ripped torso to another
the wails of broken hearts rise while
a child’s ragged dress flaps in the whistling wind
as the grit of the bomb’s explosion settles on her beloved face

Comments (4 Comments)
- Apostate Supreme - 12/11/2008
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Aww.
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- typhoonusagi - 11/16/2008
- Beautiful and horrible.
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- Dare Ashles - 09/28/2008
- oh wow. i love that. it's so beautiful in a weird sorta grusome way. but i really like it. >.< 5/5 stars
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- Drakansa - 09/28/2008
- sorry, this is random, but it's sad when the most popular peice in one of the arenas has only been rated seven times. There's just no love for the writing arena. T.T
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