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Love is like a wine glass.
It's delicate and lovely.
It can be shared over a table,
Or inside another's room.
It never is unable,
To help you make a move.
It helps you care for others deeply,
When you though you never could.
It's like a hidden angel,
With a warm and silky hood.
It's sparks you cannot see,
But feel them that you will.
They're like a nice warm bath,
Pouring in and never making a spill.
- by Temari-Rules-the-Wind |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 09/26/2008 |
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- Title: Love
- Artist: Temari-Rules-the-Wind
- Description: This is just a simple and sweet poem that I made up pretty much out of the blue.
- Date: 09/26/2008
- Tags: love
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Comments (4 Comments)
- Guilt-na Doll - 02/20/2009
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I must say, it really wasn't bad.
Though, you did find some similarites between love and wine but i'm, not sure if wine is the best think to compare love to.
It does have a bitter taste, and becuase it's alchohol it's not good for you in large portions.
But otherwise, good work. =D - Report As Spam
- Dissolve the Pain - 12/13/2008
- thats pretty darn good!
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- pkelleyann29 - 09/26/2008
- I really like this poem it reminds me of how I felt when I wrote about my grandma. You can see it here. 5/5 awsome
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- Zero_Smartie_Ninja - 09/26/2008
- i loved this! it was true and awesome! very good job.
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