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To be on Earth
And yet in hell
To wish to say
But not to tell
To be trapped
And want to be free
To wait for the light
For an eternity
To be lost
Out in the cold
Looking for the haven
Of which I've been told
To look for your love
And reach for the light
Only to fall so far
I feel so light
Trapped here
In this hell
Wanting to climb
Back to where I fell
I know it's the end
I can fell it near
And yet I can't tell
If it's death that I fear
- by kit-luvecuzimcute |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 09/22/2008 |
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- Title: No Real Title
- Artist: kit-luvecuzimcute
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doesn't really have a title but just read it and tell me what you think
if you have an idea for a title plz post it...this one hasn't had a title in over a year so it's in real need of one lolz... - Date: 09/22/2008
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Comments (6 Comments)
- Sweet bebe20 - 02/26/2009
- that was good i like it good job girl!!!
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- Toppyknot - 09/22/2008
- "and yet" is redundant. That particular phrase is a pet peeve of mine. Use one or the other. Not both.
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- UNKNOW dude ii - 09/22/2008
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dats awesome 5 stars XD lol
comment 1 of mine? - Report As Spam
- Black Rose lovin vamp - 09/22/2008
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Wow. That was really good.
I like. - Report As Spam
- kit-luvecuzimcute - 09/22/2008
- lolz thanx
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- Harkee - 09/22/2008
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I like it. It makes me feel all fuzzy inside.
Love,
~Lolli. - Report As Spam
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