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How dare you try to cage me,
With words on this page?
Do you know what I am?
I am indefinable.
I am unreachable by your verbal hands.
No elegant words spun to catch sunlight,
Nor brusque phrases meant to lay me out straight,
Can capture all that I am on this single paper.
Write until your hand falls off,
Or your last days have been counted
And I will still not be set fully to paper.
I can not be measured with your five senses.
But still I am here, stirring inside of you.
Caged in your body, and not in your words.
- Title: I try to capture love
- Artist: Thea706
- Description: Umm... I got sick of love poems in books and by other people, so despite what the title says, it is not a love poem. It is a poem about how you can't write love poems, because you can't catch love. And just because it doesn't have some sappy rhyme doesn't mean it isn't a poem.
- Date: 09/15/2008
- Tags: capture love
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Comments (3 Comments)
- Young_ for _G 45 - 01/24/2009
- I love it this is absoulty beatuiful and it really does sned a true message hey look at my poems becuase i do alo tof break up poems but this truly does bring out a real message
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- starmidnightblue - 01/04/2009
- wow that's great. the message is awesome and i agree 100% o.0
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- Toran the DragonKnight - 09/15/2008
- I don't understand why it's so low. That is some great writing and a very strong and real message. Five from me. XD Everyone else is crazy.
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