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Trapped in the glass, unaware,
of the people's constant stare,
Walking around, life is closing in,
and you know it's too late, you're not going to win,
The evil is pouring, on top of your head,
suffocating, I think you'll soon be dead,
All of a sudden, the pouring ends,
and the broken bones and lungs start to mend,
quickly and happily, the life is coming back,
and soon it will start over, like an attack,
If the sands of evil start raining on life,
you must wait through the sadness and the strife,
and soon the hourglass will turn,
and you know your lesson you have learned.
- by blame the laser rain |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 09/11/2008 |
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- Title: Life in an Hourglass
- Artist: blame the laser rain
- Description: I don't really know, I guess how the world can change so quickly.
- Date: 09/11/2008
- Tags: hourglass life
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Comments (4 Comments)
- NostaIgia - 12/23/2008
- I like the concept. You're very creative, and the rhymes were put together quite nicely. 5/5.
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- Yrissa - 09/11/2008
- I like the poem...strong feelings behind it... 5/5
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- Daughter of Elves - 09/11/2008
- I really like the idea behind this, and the work itself is really quite good.
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- blame the laser rain - 09/11/2008
- it's my first post in the knew arenas, so it's probably not my best work. I'll probably post stories and art soon as well. So if you enjoyed this, let me know
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