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A sea of rage clouds the mind,
as the heart starts to pump faster.
Guns and steel they are not the weapons of a calm man,
they are the weapons of man who is on the brink of breaking.
Why does the man act the way does?
He barely states that is a just human nature to fight.
But this nature is just the human way to gain what he wants,
and leave nothing left to take.
And so the wars keep coming,
endless amounts of steel and bullets.
Will it ever stop?
Only time will tell this,
if it does humanity will finally reached a point of nirvana.
A piece of heaven on earth,
but is it the fool who wishs this?
No it is the planet very nature to wish this,
a place wear all men are equal in the truest of values.
Amen.
- by Kiaru Augenc |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 09/09/2008 |
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- Title: The Wars Of Humanity
- Artist: Kiaru Augenc
- Description: A sensless existence, will make a sensless world...
- Date: 09/09/2008
- Tags: wars humanity peace
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- Wicker Chair - 01/07/2009
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i agree with the below
although I agree strongly with the point you're making
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- wander my friend - 09/10/2008
- well as a fellow writer i would have to say first of all it isn't one of the best peice i have seen but i would like to give you a constuctive reveiw i think you need to be more grafic and making people see exactly what you mean because you are telling me not shows me.
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- l Barbie Doll l - 09/09/2008
- 2cnd!!! i give it a 4 out of 5
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- Ms Make Me Smile - 09/09/2008
- i absolutely love it im just wondering do you by any chance write alot of couplet poetry
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