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The Love story heart
Tell me why you said it again and again!
You ruend my life when it hasn't reached its end!
You said you loved me!
But was that a lie?
Because i thought the same till i herd myself cry!
U dated my friend while you were with me!
I CANT BELIEVE U!I guess i'll just flee.
U riped my heart and spread it around,
while i looked for the pieces all around town.
It took me forever to recover my pain,
and then i thought about it and said it was lame.
Till one day i met a hansome guy,
Who fixed my heart and would never lie.
He changed my life from sorrow and sadness,
to the joy of freedom which spreaded happiness.
- by cocolatte971 |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 09/08/2008 |
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- Title: The Love story!
- Artist: cocolatte971
- Description: Its a love story about a girl and her love life.
- Date: 09/08/2008
- Tags: thelovestoryofasadgirl
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Comments (3 Comments)
- KCO_rocks - 12/23/2008
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very good, I assume that you have gone through that before. You have a few spelling errors but I think it is a brilliant poem. Keep on writing. You should check out my poems and comment on them.
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- Dr Scheisskopf - 09/09/2008
- 1st REAL comment- kool its exactly how it feels so u probably experienced it huh
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- _xxxjaypoulxxx_ - 09/09/2008
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