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Life is like a river
Sometimes treacherous, sometimes calm
Or a long, curving road
With surprises round every bend
A play waiting to be acted out
Freedom is summer
No worries to think about
Sun shining down while
The ice cream in your hand
Disappears before it can melt
Dreams are flitting fancies, stories
Creeping in softly each night
Leading us through sleep
Forgotten with the rays of morning
Sometimes, but not always
Eyes are colorful windows
Stained glass doors to the unknown
Can you see the inner fire, the élan
Inside a person through those portals?
- by xXLookingGlassAlyssXx |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 09/05/2008 |
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Comments (1 Comments)
- Farrelei - 09/06/2008
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I don't know what an elan is, but it's a very good piece of writing there ^-^
You explain each paragraph wholly so anyone can understand what picture you're trying to pain in their heads, which is a unique presentation too.
I like it very much, so I'll give you a 5/5 ^^; - Report As Spam