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she drifts here
she drifts over there
she seems ghostly
but only mostly because she's afraid of you
she's even afraid of me
i wish you could see
the girl who posseses invisibility.
You'll never know, she's too modest to tell
the secret she keeps guarded so well
Alone inside with so much to hide ,but nothing keeps her down
oh, i wish you could see the girl who no longer posesses
invisibility.
- by psychotic_aneurism |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 08/20/2008 |
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- Title: Invisibility
- Artist: psychotic_aneurism
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Description:
this is a poem i wrote about anyone, in general, who is invsible. I know what its like but i know if people would rise to the occasion everyone wouldnt be invisible. Nobody wants to be invisible either.
**Revised** i made it longer i hope you like it. constructive critisism welcome
- Date: 08/20/2008
- Tags: invisiblityinvisiblegirl
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Comments (4 Comments)
- I peed in your cereal - 11/27/2009
- may i put this on my profile?
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- I peed in your cereal - 11/27/2009
- this is me!
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- GodsDarkAngel44 - 12/24/2008
- I like your poem, but is should be a little longer and use more words!! Its great though!!
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- Vincent_Iscariot_Key - 12/15/2008
- Very simple and awesome. I do agree with your description, and the spacing, adds more effect to the poem title. Great job!
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