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My tears now flow gently down my cheek
As I hear the preacher begin to speak
You lay cold and still in your casket
like a small child asleep in its basket
Suddenly all my thoughts and fears
are swallowed by the cascades of my tears
As I silently hit reality
I think what is this feeling coming over me
Is it the loss of your love
or a message from above
Now that you've gone home
I'm sad and all aolne
But I know one day we'll be together in time
Some where down that long waiting line.
- by Lelar Bear |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 08/04/2008 |
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- Title: (A Poem for my Grandma)
- Artist: Lelar Bear
- Description: I wrote this at 14 after attending my grandma's funeral.
- Date: 08/04/2008
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Comments (6 Comments)
- saberdragon18 - 03/24/2009
- Lelar Bear my sister you have finally joined our Grandma and I wish you could have waited. I love you and I miss you everyday!!!
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- MxFelix - 11/08/2008
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Very somber an articulate for someone as young as you were. I feel connected to the speaker. Thank you for sharing this with us.
-Ismene - Report As Spam
- CaitiPHOBIC. - 11/08/2008
- This one touched me, because this is how I felt when my grandfather died... five stars; it was simply beautiful.
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- iBrightScales - 09/10/2008
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I can relate to this, I almost cried reading it ^^
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- Monblanc - 09/10/2008
- Very deep... I haven't been unlucky enough to have someone I know die yet, but I'd imagine that's how it'd feel. 3nodding
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- _x-iiLuciousLadiee - 08/05/2008
- woot! 1st comment. i finally found it lela. dude lela; thats deep. i love it. anyone can relate to this. [: 5 starss. =] <3
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