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snow falls as i walk in the woods,
noone is sight,
i slip over a root,
i look up and see a girl,
i get up and ask he who she is,
she just stares,
then she holds out her hand,
i get up and my hand greets hers,
a flash of light and shes gone,
is she real,
can i trust my self?
- Title: an angel?
- Artist: gghhjja
- Description: mostly true
- Date: 08/03/2008
- Tags: angel
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Comments (4 Comments)
- Cottoncandyocbra3 - 12/13/2008
- Argh! "though" I hate typos. >.<
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- Cottoncandyocbra3 - 12/13/2008
- It lacks a lot of things. You did say you kind of messed up, thoug, so you can understand my low score. 1.25/5
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- Karak15 - 08/03/2008
- it's interestting. Seems like some is missing though...
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- gghhjja - 08/03/2008
- i kinda messed up
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