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Life isn’t that good,
I don’t know why I try or even should.
All the war the fighting, it isn’t right,
Maybe I should just give up the fight.
I look around at all the people losing themselves to this place,
One person killing another just because there another race.
Or even just siblings fighting with one another,
Just because he took her favorite cover.
People fight, siblings fight, animals fight,
Sometimes I would just like to fly away on a kite.
Maybe I could go live on mars,
Put my life in the hands of the stars.
As you now see life isn’t as good as we thought,
Now we are just in this big mess, we are caught.
This is not the world we were promised.
- by its_raining_lets_dance |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 07/30/2008 |
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- Title: WHY?
- Artist: its_raining_lets_dance
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ugh i cant believe im doing this. i never have shown anyone my writing. just so u know my sister taylor posted this against my will.
this is a poem when i wrote when i was 7. (thats why it sucks)
dont worry im not suicidal we were assigned 2 write a poem about what we dont like in this world.
well here it goes... - Date: 07/30/2008
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- xXDark_Vampire_LoverXx - 01/05/2009
- that was great!
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- stinkyfrog - 12/12/2008
- wow for only 7 that is amazing!! its a really good poem you should pst more. and dont worry it dosnt sound suicidal. you should read mine. lol those r very lol
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- xXxCaLiFoRnIaBaByxXx - 07/30/2008
- that was so great!!!! it did not suck at all. that was way better than any of my poems because like i dont even try because i dont care. that was the best poem i have ever read and i dont say that a lot.
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