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this song....
reminds me....
of days i wish were past....
but i cant forget....
wont forget....
it’s a constant reminder....
of my past....
and how things used to be...
i try...
but i cant....
find a place in my heart...
to forget...
and forgive...
the one who stole my heart...
gave me a new world....
but it was torn away at the last second...
that one second in time....
seems so little....
but means so much....
i wish....
i could take it all back....
for that one second....
the time we never got...
the second we cannot get back...
it seems that all the meaningless things in life...
all have some great importance later on...
cherish that moment...
seize it...
and never let it go...
hold on...
tightly...
for when it blows away...
it’s gone forever...
a distant memory...
a constant reminder...
of a place...
and in a moment...
where we could just hold each other...
and not worry about anything anymore...
just that feeling inside...
of clarity....
and peace...
we all miss it sometimes, don’t we?...
well...
i miss it...
everyday of my life...
that one second...
that i’ve lost...
- Title: "One Second" by: Max Eagle
- Artist: Max Eagle
- Description: a poem i wrote for a girl i thought i loved
- Date: 07/24/2008
- Tags: maxeagle onesecond
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Comments (7 Comments)
- xXsecret_artistXx - 04/01/2009
- i love it! it's so lyrical!
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- murrrdiffff - 12/15/2008
- amazing! loved it!
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- Rachmaster67 - 07/24/2008
- That was a great poem.^^ Try to use more formation and capatilization, though it gets you better ratings sometimes, I look over it for you though because the feelings weren't too strong and it flowed in a peaceful way. I give it 5/5, please check out mine?
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- missyogo - 07/24/2008
- thats so sweet very very good
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- small kid_21054 - 07/24/2008
- good but sad and true
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- maryyupee - 07/24/2008
- very nice!but sad... sad
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- UNKNOW dude ii - 07/24/2008
- nice dis poems awesome!
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